在中考中,写作是考查英语水平的一项要紧内容,一些明显的句法错误将会使整篇文章水平大优惠扣。句子通顺准确是写作的基本需要,今天为大伙带来写作中最容易出现的九种句法错误,赶快学习起来,为我们的英语写作加加分吧!
一词性误用词性误用常表现为:介词错用为动词,形容词错用为副词,名词错用为动词等。例: They earn some money so that they can independence.他们赚钱是为了自立。
分析:independence是名词,句中误用为动词。
改为:They earn some money so that they can be independent.
二修饰语错位
英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语放在句子中不一样的地方,或许会引起句子含义的变化。这一点常被同学们所忽略,因而导致了非必须的误解。例: I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.我相信我会做得非常不错,而且我将对校园外的世界有更好的认知。
分析:better地方不当,应置于句末。改为:I believe I can do it well and I will know the world outside the campus better.
三句子不完整
在口语中,交际双方可借用手势、语气等来理解他们的意思,不完整的句子也完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这常常发生在主句写完将来,学生又想加些补充说明的状况下。例: There are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV, radio and newspaper.知道社会的渠道有不少,譬如可以通过电视、广播和报纸。
分析:本段后半部分“For example, by TV, radio and newspaper.”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词汇,不可以独立成句。改为:There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio and newspaper.
四主谓不同英语的谓语动词在人称和数上需要与主语维持一致。因为受汉语的影响,很多同学在写作时常常忽视句子的主谓一致关系,从而出现错误。例: once one have time, he can do what he want to do.人一旦有了时间,他就能想做什么就做什么。
分析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has;同理,want应改为wants,本句是典型的主谓不同。改为:once one has time, he can do what he wants to do.五指代不清
指代不清主要指代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不同。例: 1. Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.玛丽和我姐姐非常要好,由于她要她做她的伴娘。
分析:读完上面这一句话,读者没办法明确地判断两位女孩中哪个将结婚,哪个将当伴娘。假如大家把容易引起误解的代词加以明确,意思就一清二楚了。改为:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
2.We can also know the society by serving it yourself.大家还可以通过亲身参与、体验的方法知道社会。
分析:句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不同。改为:We can also know the society by serving it ourselves.
六重复累赘
同学们在写书面表达时应尽可能做到简洁:写句子没一个多余的词,写段落没一个多余的句子。例: 1. In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.尽管他非常懒惰,我还是喜欢他。
分析:本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同位语从句,大家可根据“简洁”的原则加以简化。改为:In spite of his laziness, I like him.
2. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.对于勤奋善良的人来讲,钱只不过用来购买所需东西的工具。
分析:整个句子可以大大简化,重复累赘过多。改为:Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
七句子不连贯
句子不连贯是指一个句子内部前言不搭后语,或是结构上不畅通。
例:
The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
淡水是地球上非常重要的东西。
分析:The fresh water与逗号后的it不连贯,it与things在语法上不同。
改为:Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
八结构混乱
句子结构混乱主如果受汉语思维方法影响而致使的。同学们在平时学习中应多加训练,培养语感。
例:
1. There are many students are playing basketball on the playground.
操场上有很多学生在打篮球。
分析:上面的句子中出现了两个谓语动词,不符合英语的语法习惯。
改为:Many students are playing basketball on the playground.
2. The girl is standing over there is from a big city.站在那边的女生来自一个大城市。
分析:一个简单句中不可以有两个谓语系动词,结构混乱。
改为:The girl standing over there is from a big city.
九句型单调,缺少过渡一篇文章假如简单句过多,句型单调,即便语法错误较少,思路较明确,看后也会使人感到乏味。同学们应掌握单句、复句交替用,常常变换句型,尝试用一些较复杂的语法结构及句型,适合运用过渡词,使文章愈加连贯。
例:
They sleep fewer than eight hours every day. It has great influence on their health.
他们天天睡眠少于八小时,这对他们的健康有非常大影响。
分析:这段话中用的全部是简单句,句型比较单调,可以改为定语从句或加入插入语。
改为:Actually, they sleep fewer than eight hours every day, which will,no doubt, have great influence on their health.
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